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Post  Rosethorn95 on Sun Feb 05, 2012 12:50 am

{These are just little bits and pieces that I write when I'm bored.}

"Ravenwing be patient, they'll open their eyes eventually. It took Rockypaw half a moon before he opened his!"
"I want too know their eye colours." The dark tabby protested.
"Even after that it will take longer for their real colours to show! So go hunt so I can rest!"

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"Look sweetling, aren't your sisters cute?" Shadowclaw purred.
"They don't do much." Rockypaw said uncertainly.
"Of course they don't, you didn't do much when you were a week old!" His mother teased.

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They were the last apprentices Sleekstar made before she passed away and Sage-eyes became leader. The coffee coloured tabby was proud to have the honour of making the sleek black, white tailed she cat a warrior. It was also the first warrior Sagestar made.
"Under the gaze of our ancestors I give you the name Snowtail! May you bring honour to your clan and family! Shadows hide you Snowtail!"
"Snowtail, Snowtail, Snowtail, Snowtail, Snowtail!!!!"

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"I don't know Raven, there's that big dog out back" The black and white tom meowed, fear plain in his eyes
"C'mon Tiny, they waste so much food! Wouldn't you like to feel full for a change?" The odd coloured tabby baited.
"Of course, but it's A DOG!"

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"Phoenixkit drop that spider right NOW!" His mother's horrified voice echoed around the clearing. The small ginger kit dropped the -quite harmless- house spider and squeaked in fear. And he was teased forever after.

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No she was not attracted to him.
Not the way his muscles moved under his pelt
Or the way he shrugged
Definatly not attracted to the way his eyes lit up when he gave one of his rare smiles.
Not at the way she knew deep down it was just for her.
No, she was definatly NOT attracted to Thornheart.

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It was easy to see and she couldn't help but be a bit jealous.
But she loved her sister and would not let the petty jealousy take over.
Now she just had to get that stubborn forest tom to realise how Mercury felt.

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He'd never planned to fall in love.
He was the only child of the General.
Groomed to take over.
But there she had been.
Her soft green eyes and her pretty pale pelt.
Her kind words and her innocent gaze.
Why did she have to be a Kittypet?

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She jumped at the chance to hunt with him.
She listened to him swapping stories with the other warriors with rapt attention.
She had tried to hide it though.
She'd caught herself babbling about him when the reserved Rosepaw gave her a pointed look and had clamped her mouth shut, her ears burning with embarrassment.
She had had to stop herself following him around when she got older.
Had to stop herself from giving into the jealously when he looked at another she-cat.
She really had no claim, but it didn't matter.
When he died, she was the first to mourn.

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"What are you doing down there?" He really hated her calm voice.
"Taking a nap. WHAT DOES IT LOOK LIKE I'M DOING" He yowled angrily.
"Odd place for a nap." She meowed evenly. She was pulling his tail, why that sly old she-devil.
"What are you standing there for, HELP YOUR LEADER OUT!" He shouted.
"Ask nicely Smolderstar" She meowed
"NEVER!" He countered.
"I hope you like living down a rabbit hole then." She turned to walk away.
"FINE! Fine.... Rosethorn, would you please help me out of here?" He mumbled.
"I didn't quite catch that."
"Would you please help me out of here Rosethorn? Please?"
"Alright."

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He had been a gentletom.
Endlessly charming and and all around nice guy.
Even when confronted by strange cats, in a tree no less, he had been charming.
He became a good friend and he was sorely missed when he left.
She had always appreciated a handsome tom

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She was ecstatic to see him again.
His mind had been thoroughly blown.
How could he be better looking then she remembered?
Maybe it was the new scars and mature way he held himself.
He was still a Gentletom though.
Probably would be until death.
What was this annoying fluttering in her chest?
His smile was heart stopping, how could they not see it?
Ah, she still appreciated a handsome tom.

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"Hey Swiftkit, that's not fair!" The larger kit complained.
"Is so Coalkit!" The sassy she-kit snapped.
"You can't just rip the moss ball up and declare yourself the winner!" He meowed, bristling indignantly.
"Can too! So just give me my prize already!" She meowed.
"Your prize is first bath, your fur is covered in moss!" Rosethorn declared.
"Nuuuuuueeee!!!!!"

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"Hey Coalfade...?"
"-sigh- What is it Swiftfeather?"
".......I never meant to hurt you."
"That... was a long time ago...... and I forgive you."
"Ahh.... Well thanks."
"Now how about we yell at some apprentices?"
"Sounds good to me."

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Stoneclaw was never very complicated.
He liked a simple life with few worries.
All that had changed with her.
She drove him mad but he still loved her.
The she vanished and his heart ripped in two.
She came back heavy with some other tom's kits.
He was angry at her, even though they were not mates.
But then suddenly she was his and all was well.
Until she vanished again and he was forced to put up with the sister in law.
Rosethorn really did not appreciate his devotion to his son.

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I can't really tell you how I feel can I?
After all you hate my guts and love the former leader.
Who I'm sure I've mentioned is dead.
How did I find myself in love with another toms mate.
Worse she has kits, who also hate my guts.
I'm sure you'd laugh in my face if I told you the truth.

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Sparrowblaze.
The name makes my blood boil.
She should of been mine.
We played together when all you did was whine for your milk.
We could argue back and forth for hours.
Good times.
Why wasn't it me Swiftfeather? Why this whiny badger?
Why not me, mi amor?

FrostClan 3.

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Do you know when you scowl you get a furrow between your eyes?
I want to lick it away, but you look so cute.
I like it when you get angry,
He totally deserved the mousebile to the face.
I'd never be cruel to you.
But I probably would.
I'm not a nice tom, not at all.

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I still think about you.
Do you think about me?
I still think about when you ripped out my heart.
About how you left our daughter.
How can I raise her without you?
She's too much like me.
If she was like you....
I don't think I could stand it.

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"Blazepaw! Snap out of it." He shook his head.
"Sorry Greenpaw, I was just thinking." He mumbled
"What's her name?" Greenpaw asked.
"WHAT!" He gasped.
"Her name lover boy." He meowed and nudged him with a paw.
"I don't know what your talking about."
"Oh so she's outside the clan?" Greenpaw smirked.
Blazepaw mumbled something.
"What was that Lazy Blazy?"
"SLEETPAW DAMNNIT!" Blazepaw snapped, fur bristling
"Oh StarClan.... from another clan? Are you INSANE." Greenpaw stammered.

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(TBU)


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Re: Rose's Dabbles & Short Stories

Post  MewMew100 on Sun Feb 05, 2012 1:30 am

I love the second to last one you did about Mercury and Thornheart Very Happy
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Post  Rosethorn95 on Sun Feb 05, 2012 1:32 am

There are some more comming up soon.

I can write some about your characters if you want.
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Post  MewMew100 on Sun Feb 05, 2012 1:34 am

Shweet!! Maybe one about how hyper lil Petalpaw used to crush on Pheonixtalon...that it.., before Pineclaw and Aigean.
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Post  Rosethorn95 on Sun Feb 05, 2012 1:36 am

Good idea.
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Re: Rose's Dabbles & Short Stories

Post  Green Hornet on Sun Feb 05, 2012 1:38 am

WRITE ONE ABOUT SMOLDERSTAR

OR SWIFTPATH

BOTH EMBARRASSING.
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Post  MewMew100 on Sun Feb 05, 2012 1:41 am

.........Soulthunder's joy from seeing Raven in her first life..then her childish crush on Raven now XD

Nite Smile
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Post  Rosethorn95 on Sun Feb 05, 2012 1:55 am

Night.

Smolderstar one is now my favourite XD
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Post  Green Hornet on Sun Feb 05, 2012 2:02 am

LOL

That's all I can say.
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Post  Rosethorn95 on Sun Feb 05, 2012 2:03 am

I can't imagine anything more embarrassing for him than having to ask her of all cats for help.
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Post  Rosethorn95 on Sun Feb 05, 2012 2:12 am

I've decided I'm also going to write crack dabbles...

Like Smolderstar X Rosethorn

you all know you want to see it.
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Post  Torchiclove on Sun Feb 05, 2012 9:09 am

One about Stoneclaw would be epic, but I wouldn't know what it would be about XD
IUI should work on my crack stories, but I'm lazy~
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Post  dragonnaruto on Sun Feb 05, 2012 9:48 am

Pretty cool stuff. lol. xD. I never knew how much Mercury likes Thornheart. I always thought it was kind of a subtle thing.
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Post  Torchiclove on Sun Feb 05, 2012 9:49 am

Yes, now it is pretty damn obvious. I like that..hmmm....yes Twisted Evil
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Post  dragonnaruto on Sun Feb 05, 2012 9:53 am

O.o. Wtf?
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Post  Torchiclove on Sun Feb 05, 2012 9:55 am

I'm just having some seekrit ebil planz. They aren't really evil, though...damn. I'm gonna find a way to make these planz evil.
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Post  dragonnaruto on Sun Feb 05, 2012 9:57 am

For evilness, you need to kill cats. All Avada kedavara and shit.
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Post  Torchiclove on Sun Feb 05, 2012 10:01 am

I don't think any cat is gonna end up dead. Unless there's like a huge fight or something. I doubt that would happen though...
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Post  Green Hornet on Sun Feb 05, 2012 12:55 pm

COALFADE x SWIFTFEATHER FTW XD
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Post  Torchiclove on Sun Feb 05, 2012 12:57 pm

That would be hilarious!!! Almost like...hmmm....
RubypawXThornheart
Or PetalmistXThunderfreeze
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Post  Green Hornet on Sun Feb 05, 2012 12:59 pm

Smolderstar x Aigean would work. That was actually one of my first ideas...
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Post  Sheyna on Sun Feb 05, 2012 1:43 pm

Petalmist and Thunderfreeze? XD Interesting.
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Post  MewMew100 on Sun Feb 05, 2012 3:09 pm

CherrywingXSagestar???
SoulthunderXIcefern??
OceanfeatherXGoldenstreak?
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Post  Rosethorn95 on Sun Feb 05, 2012 3:50 pm

Petalmist is his AUNT.
I think CoalXSwift is very cute. I'm actually making that one into a comic. It's set when they are both elders XD
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Post  Sheyna on Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:50 pm

Which makes it so much more weird.
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