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Post  MewMew100 on Fri Jun 13, 2014 12:01 pm

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[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Appearance:[/b]
[b]Personality:[/b]
[b]Other:[/b]

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[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Species:[/b]
[b]Appearance:[/b]
[b]Personality:[/b]
[b]Ability:[/b]
[b]Moveset:[/b]
[b]Held Item:[/b]
[b]Other:[/b]

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[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Clan:[/b]
[b]Rank:[/b]
[b]Appearance:[/b]
[b]Personality:[/b]
[b]Crush:[/b]
[b]Mate:[/b]
[b]Kits:[/b]
[b]Kin:[/b]
[b]Other:[/b]


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Post  MewMew100 on Fri Jun 13, 2014 12:05 pm

Example:

Name: Marie the Mew
Gender: Female
Age: 16 years
Species: Mew
Appearance: A regular Mew wearing a hot pink scarf and odd, light green eyes. Her tail is longer and scruffier than most others.
Personality: She is sweet and friendly, but can be somewhat rude at times. She cares greatly for her friends, but dislikes those who are mean.
Ability: Cute Charm
Moveset: Bubble, Psycho Cut, Growl, Tackle
Held Item: Oran Berry
Other: She loves Flaffy because they are soft, so she often makes a bed out of their old wool in her cave home. She also love bouncing on the bubbles she creates.
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Post  Sarg.Tweety898 on Fri Jun 13, 2014 12:20 pm

Name: Trent the Treecko
Gender: Boy
Age: 11
Species: Treecko
Appearance: Blue eyes,Long and Thick tail
Personality: High temper issues when bothered...Will do anything to protect his friends.But he has a problem about to many enemys. Evil or Very Mad 
Ability: Over Grow
Moveset: Razor leaf, Absorb, Cut, Pound
Held Item: Stratus Berry
Other: He attends to eat Leaves but only 1 type which is jungle leaves..
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Post  gavine000 on Fri Jun 13, 2014 2:12 pm

Name: Gavin the Mudkip
Gender: Boy
Age: 11
Species: Mudkip
Appearance: A spot of mud around his eyes Mudkip
Personality: Calm,Happy,Kind
Ability: Torment
Moveset: Mud Slap,Bubble,Tail whip,Water gun
Other: Under Water Cave, Doesnt like being called names..

Oh boy....well, here goes...

Firstly, Gavin's appearance. "A spot of mud around his eye" is quite good. However, you can't just put "Mudkip" right after it without any punctuation. A better way to describe him would be
"A regular Mudkip with a spot of mud around his eye."

Secondly, "Calm, happy, kind" isn't a sentence. Perhaps try "He is very calm and kind, and always wears a happy face."

Also, his ability would be "Torrent" and I'm not sure if Mudkip can learn Bubble. Maybe try "Mud Shot".

And finally, his Other area is a bit weird. How about trying "He lives in an underwater cave and dislikes being called mean names."
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Post  Sarg.Tweety898 on Fri Jun 13, 2014 5:17 pm

Name: Tweety898 the MineCrafter
Gender: Boy
Age: 11
Appearance: Blonde Hair, Blue eyes,And wears an odd watch....
Personality: Determined to Beat the Nether
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Post  gavine000 on Fri Jun 13, 2014 5:25 pm

Name: Gavin the Adventurer
Gender: Boy
Age: 11
Appearance: Long brown hair but coverd by a leather cap, Brown eyes..
Personality: Determined
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Scurry-Paw

Post  Sarg.Tweety898 on Sun Jun 15, 2014 4:15 pm

Name: Scurry-Paw
Gender: Boy
Age: 17 Moons (in cat years)
Clan The After Clan
Rank Leader
b]Appearance:[/b]A long-furred tom cat with a fluffy, black pelt*. He has icy blue eyes and his furry tail is tipped in white. His claws are short, but sharp and his paws are colored white like the tip of his tail. Scurrypaw has needle-like teeth and a faded pink nose to match his tongue.  
Personality:He is active and strong-hearted, and would make a very clever leader for Afterclan. However, he has a bit of a short temper. But overall, he is a cool cat


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Re: Character Creator

Post  MewMew100 on Mon Jun 16, 2014 2:57 am

Alright bro. Here's where I'm gonna help you out with my flawless knowledge about warrior cats.

1. Cats age in 'Moons', which mean 'Months'. As well, they go like this in order:
Kit (Kitten) = 1-6 moons old; Their names in with 'kit'.
Apprentice (Kid Cat) = 6-12 moons; Their names end with 'paw'.
Warrior / Medicine Cat / Elder = 12+ moons; Their names can end different (Except for leaders- they end with 'star'.)

2. I'll post the ranks of a Clan here for reference:
Kits - The babies of the clan who spend their time playing and cannot leave the camp.
Apprentices - The young cats who are training to become warriors or medicine cats.
Warriors - The adult cats who fight to protect the clan and teach the apprentices.
Medicine Cats - The cats who act like healers and have a den full of herbs and plants to use as medicine.
Elders - Cats who are too old to fight and have to stay in camp like the kits.
Queens - Female cats who have kits still feeding on milk, or are pregnant.
Deputy - A special warrior who will replace the leader when they die or get sick.
Leader - The cat who leads the clan and has been given nine lives to rule with.

3. Your form was okay for a newbie, but it needs some work ^^' Let me see if I can help...

Name: Scurrypaw (You don't need the '-' or dash mark in between Scurry and Paw.)
Gender: Tom (A 'tom' or tomcat are male cats; She-cats are females.)
Age: 10 moons (Being 16 years old would make him an elder since 12 moons = 1 year.)
Clan: Afterclan (You don't need 'the' in the title, and 'After' and 'Clan' need to be one word.)
Rank: Apprentice or Leader (With 'paw' at the end of his name, that means he is an apprentice. But as the leader, he would have to have 'star' at the end of his name. Example: Blackclaw to Blackstar; Frostfur to Froststar)
Appearance: A long-furred tom cat with a fluffy, black pelt*. He has icy blue eyes and his furry tail is tipped in white. His claws are short, but sharp and his paws are colored white like the tip of his tail. Scurrypaw has needle-like teeth and a faded pink nose to match his tongue. (*Pelts are the furs of animals. Also, when describing your character, who want to use enough imagery so that they can picture him in their heads.)
Personality: He is active and strong-hearted, and would make a very clever leader for Afterclan. However, he has a bit of a short temper. But overall, he is a cool cat. (Try using full sentences when writing out a form, brother.)
Other:??? (Here would be where you would put extras about him- like how he came to create Afterclan and why.)


Mew's Kitties ~

Name: Paintedtail
Gender: Tom
Age: 27 moons
Clan: Afterclan
Rank: Medicine Cat
Appearance: A thin and lanky tom with his pelt colored a sleek, satiny white. However, his rump is mottled with sparsely placed splatters of ginger, gold, russet, tabby, brindle, grey, and blue along his body. His ears are quite large in comparison to others and his tail is long, thick, feathered, and colored mostly in a rich, deep red though it does bear a few smaller spots of the other colors dotting him. His legs are long and paws are dainty, but swift. His odd eyes are a rare icy blue- almost white color with faint flecks of amber within the iris and the fur ringing around his eyes are a deep, rich brown color.
Personality: A gentle soul, Paintedtail is a calm cat with an almost regal air about him. Considering that he is the oldest one in the clan currently, he is very wise as he has taken it upon himself to guide the younger cats and help them in any way he can. And though he'd much rather solve conflict through speaking, his fighting skill cannot be denied.
Other: Even though he wasn't trained to be a Medicine Cat's apprentice, he has been learning about different herbs and plants to use for healing and has become the clan's Medicine Cat. His younger sister is Oceanpaw.

Name: Firetips
Gender: Tom
Age: 14 moons
Clan: Afterclan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance: A handsome, strong tom with a ruffled pelt of bright ginger and dark russet streaks. Though his pelt remains mostly flat, the areas around his shortened tail, cheeks, ears, and elbows tend to be more fluffy and feathered and stick out messily. His body, although lean, is built firmly like a lynx's, with wide paws and very pointed ears. His eyes are faded yellow-green, like the sun-scorched grasses of a high plain. However, his most noticeable feature is the long tufts of bright crimson which tip his tall ears and wisp like small blazes when he bounds.
Personality: Firetips is open, bright, and the pure embodiment of a vibrant, young warrior teeming with energy and promise. He enjoys aiding his clan in any way he can, whether its hunting for the clan, playing with the kits, or even clearing out old bedding. Just as long as he doesn't have to mess with mouse bile or herbs....
Other: He takes the greatest pride in his ears, keeping them neatly groomed and damage-free.

Name: Oceanpaw (Oceansnow)
Gender: She-cat
Age: 8 moons
Clan: Afterclan
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance: A pretty, long-furred she-cat with light grey-blue Nd snowy white mottled fur that alter colors in large splotches and silver marking her muzzle, lower neck, belly, and paws, as well as the tips of her ears and her bushy tail. Her eyes are a deep, bright crystal blue and always glow with a cheery sheen, seeping into the souls of young toms. Her body is covered in odd, wispy stripe-like spirals of dark grey which show a silvery sheen against her blue and white coloring.
Personality: A very cheery and bubbly cat, Oceanpaw is open and kind to all others around her. She generally acts like a ray of sunshine for some in gloomy times and as comic relief for others during times of stress.
Other: She also seems to have a rather unhealthy obsession with the eating of voles. Her older brother is Paintedtail.

Name: Petaleggs
Gender: She-cat
Age: 12 moons
Clan: Afterclan
Rank: New Warrior
Appearance: A little she-cat of soft cream with a wispy pelt of downy fur. Her paws are small and legs short, and the tips of her ears and cheeks are tufts with little clumps of airy fur. Her tail is shorter than most, but not quite like a bob, and its fur is longer and wispily wild. Tufts stick out from between each of her toes, and her eyes are a mix of pale heather and red amber. A spray of small spots colored pure white dapple her shoulders and upper back like the speckling of robin eggs.
Personality: Petaleggs is curious, kind, but also a bit quiet and reserved. She loves to sneak off to explore and play, but knows the right and wrong times to be playful or serious.
Other: She was just made a warrior and sometimes wanders off into the clan's territory to search for the sisters she lost many moons ago.
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Post  Sarg.Tweety898 on Tue Jun 17, 2014 10:46 am

Name: Dawnfall
Gender: Tom
Age: 26 Moons
Clan: After Clan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance: Thin and black as night fur with a dark grey tail.
Personality: Energetic but scronny and shy.
Crush: Petalegs
Mate: None
Kits: None
Kin: None
Other: None
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Re: Character Creator

Post  MewMew100 on Thu Jun 19, 2014 12:25 pm

TBU

Name: Pepper (Hotscent)
Gender: Female
Age: 42 moons
Clan: None
Rank: Rogue
Appearance: A pretty she-cat whose elegant gate and lithe form would be more than enough to win her a few mates, were it not for her personality, which is as shrewd and abrasive as scars marring her beautiful body. She has lavish fur of reddish-tawny and deep ginger streaks buried in the thick pelt on her flanks. Her eyes are a radiant golden yellow which burn as hotly as the sun if you stare too long, and the fur on her ruffled, fluffy crimson flame of a tail matches the color of the fur which layers the top lids of her eyes. Her quick paws and tuft-tipped ears are the same deep red color.
Personality: Despite how hyper and friendly as she can be, Hotscent is generally one of those cats who you either love of hate. She can be shrewd, snappy, and very abrasive at times, but is usually good-natured.
Crush: ~
Mate: ~
Kits: ~
Kin: ~
Other: She is a strong fighter and often tries to take the role of leader when she joins.

Name: Calshier (Wolfcrest)
Gender: Male
Age: 35 moons
Clan: None
Rank: Rogue
Appearance: A large, dark grey tabby tom with mottled stripes of slightly darker charcoal to his pelt. He is well-bodied with a sturdy gate and lean muscles which appear large and well kept. He is taller than the majority of his other clanmates, and the tom has paws that would eclipse others from their sheer size. He has a bit of a thicker scruff which hangs like a small mane, the ends tinted almost to a black color. Along his strong spine creeps a similar dark color till the tip of his ruffled tail. His paw pads are a nice, firm black already marred with thin scars from wear. Dark silver colors the majority of his back, as well as the sides of his legs and area around his eyes and muzzle. His eyes are an odd, golden yellow that glow with a strange, stinging coldness, but carry a loyal warm at the same time.
Personality: Wolfcrest's resolve is unbreakable and his actions aren't swayed by the emotions he keeps hidden away from every eye. The tom is rather coveted by many cats, but he has a bit of a coldness that seems to stun those who try to get too close to him. He isn't mean, but he isn't necessarily nice either and he carries an aloof air of indifference about his being which none seem to fully understand.
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Name: Taffie (Longbird)
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Appearance: A thin, brown she-cat mottled with a mix of darker browns and lighter tans. Her spine and tail is dappled dark with colors of soot and ash, and her eyes are a soft, pastel green. Her body structure is very fit, being lithe and light-weighted. Her tail is very slender, paws are quick, and legs are almost stick-thin. A jagged streak of blackish brown blazes across the front of her face along her muzzle- not so much reaching her brown nose, nor reaching past her eyes- but the color stretches off to blend into the dark black that rims her eyes. The skin lining her lips on the inner of her mouth is a gleaming black as well as her pawpads, and a few spots of pale tan and misty white dapple her forehead, tails, and ears, and a stripe of the same color streaks down her spine to the base of her tail.
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