Into the Odd Wonderness of the Mind (TBU)

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Into the Odd Wonderness of the Mind (TBU)

Post  Chibi248 on Sun Sep 18, 2011 12:37 pm

The mind shall trick only.........idiots.
Into the Odd Wonderness of the Mind


Prologue:

Lavender, Rust, and Ivy were all walking in the forest one morning, minding their own business. "So where are we going?", Lavender asked. Weird.....I don't even remember getting up this morning....It's like I woke up wandering in the forest., "Don't you remember? We're looking for prey, you dingdong.", Ivy said jokingly. "Ohhh," Lavender replied. The cats kept walking on, until they reached a twoleg fence. "Come on.", Rust said as he climbed it.
Weird, why would prey be over this fence?, Lavender wondered as she followed her friends over the fence. When they reached the bottom, something happened.....something that would give cats nightmares.....

Chapter 1:

"Why is the ground so low?", Lavnder asked aloud. Rust looked at her, his eyes popping out of his head. "Y-you're a-a TWOLEG!!!", he screamed. "SO ARE YOU!!!!", Ivy yelled. "YOU TOO, IVY!!!, Lavender screamed. The cats/twolegs, started screaming and running around, terrified.

I love green tea., Mable thought, as she boiled the water over her old fashoined stove. Mable was a 76 year old lady, who lived on her own. "Ohhh, my soaps are almost on.", she said aloud. All of a sudden, she heard screaming from her backyard. She looked out the window and saw three teenagers, screaming at the top of their lungs. A group of gangbangers!!! She ran as fast as an eldery woman could, locking her door before calling the police.
Lavender looked at her paws. They were long and strange. She put her paws on her chest. "What...I used to have like, 6 of these things!!", she shrieked. A big, flashing monster showed up. Two twolegs came out and grabbed the friends. "No, we must get back to Frostclan!!!", Ivy squealed. "It's their meth lab!!!", one of the officers yelled to the other. "Are you kids under the influence?......Jerry, I think they're high!!!",Pete screamed. Then Jerry yelled, "Alright, get in the car!"
"No!!", Rust yelled, clamping down on the twoleg's hand. "Owww....Pete!! The damn kid bit me!!", Jerry yelled. The twolegs pushed the kids into the rumbling monster..........


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Post  MewMew100 on Sun Sep 18, 2011 2:13 pm

Lol!!!! Its a group of gang bangerz!!!!! XD
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Post  Torchiclove on Sun Sep 18, 2011 2:34 pm

LOL XD!!! Gangbangers!!! I like it a lot... they're high!
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Post  Green Hornet on Sun Sep 18, 2011 2:38 pm

I love it, though the correct way of typing/writing is every time someone else talks, you start a new paragraph. It's confusing otherwise.
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Post  dragonnaruto on Sun Sep 18, 2011 2:47 pm

Green Hornet wrote:I love it, though the correct way of typing/writing is every time someone else talks, you start a new paragraph. It's confusing otherwise.

Actually the correct way of writing is to only start a new paragraph when the topic changes. But I suppose you could do that in an FF. Just don't do it you plan on writing a novel.
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Post  Sheyna on Sun Sep 18, 2011 3:06 pm

dragonnaruto wrote:
Green Hornet wrote:I love it, though the correct way of typing/writing is every time someone else talks, you start a new paragraph. It's confusing otherwise.

Actually the correct way of writing is to only start a new paragraph when the topic changes. But I suppose you could do that in an FF. Just don't do it you plan on writing a novel.
I was always taught that when writing, you do start a new paragraph when someone else starts talking, but you also do when the topic changes...
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Post  Torchiclove on Sun Sep 18, 2011 3:14 pm

personally, I don't give a shit. I'll read the rules when I write a novel which will, by the way, be never. I like colored text Cool
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Post  Green Hornet on Sun Sep 18, 2011 3:19 pm

I was taught that way as well, Sheyna, but I didn't mention the 'when the topic changes' part because that was a 'no duh' for me. XD
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Post  Sheyna on Sun Sep 18, 2011 3:21 pm

XD Yeah, it is for me too.
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Post  Green Hornet on Sun Sep 18, 2011 3:23 pm

And as a reply to DN,

Read any novel, I dare you. They do it my way. XD

"LOL" said the magic banana. "That is funny" the other replied. They both laughed some more. "Magic bananas are cool." Said the first magic banana. "Yes, they are." Replied the last one.

Doesn't look right. XD
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Post  Torchiclove on Sun Sep 18, 2011 3:31 pm

I know GH is right. I've read enough novels to realize that.

ex: "Hi!" Riverpaw mewed, looking at Moonpelt.
"How are you?" Moonpelt asked.
"fine," Riverpaw replied.

now i must go, GOODBYE
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Re: Into the Odd Wonderness of the Mind (TBU)

Post  MewMew100 on Sun Sep 18, 2011 3:57 pm

Byez.....Hey, I added a new chapter to myz story Razz
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Re: Into the Odd Wonderness of the Mind (TBU)

Post  Sheyna on Sun Sep 18, 2011 4:02 pm

Lol, it looks like you added it awhile ago. I've already read all that you have so far. Razz
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Re: Into the Odd Wonderness of the Mind (TBU)

Post  dragonnaruto on Mon Sep 19, 2011 3:15 pm

That's cus you guys read books like that. I don't really notice because usually the books I read, its a tiny bit of dialogue in a massive paragraph...so yeah...
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Post  Green Hornet on Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:19 pm

Yes, but only ONE person talks in that paragraph. If a DIFFERENT person starts talking, you should start a new paragraph. XD
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Post  dragonnaruto on Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:20 pm

Yeah. but i don't really notice the divisions of the text( or care about them), I focus more on the context.
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Post  Chibi248 on Tue Sep 27, 2011 5:56 pm

PICTURES WERE DRAWN BY MEW, NOT ME!!!!! Razz
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