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Post  dragonnaruto on Tue Dec 27, 2011 2:51 pm

lmao. xD

Yay! One of my cats is in a prophecy, even if it is a fake one. xD
I need to become more active in the Frostclan RP.
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Post  Sheyna on Tue Dec 27, 2011 2:55 pm

Hey Mew, do you think you could help me come up with a prophecy for one of my RPs? I suck at prophecies. >.<
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Post  MewMew100 on Tue Dec 27, 2011 2:57 pm

sure! What do you want to happen in it and who are the cats?

And DN, Sunkit isn't one of your main cats?? O.o
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Post  Sheyna on Tue Dec 27, 2011 2:59 pm

... Damn, there's a lot of cats. XD

Would it be alright if I PM'ed you about it?
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Post  MewMew100 on Tue Dec 27, 2011 3:00 pm

Oh course Smile And this proves it, I AM THE QUEEN OF PROPHECIES!!!! All who challenge me shall fail!! Keh heh HEH!!!!
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Post  dragonnaruto on Tue Dec 27, 2011 3:04 pm

MewMew100 wrote:sure! What do you want to happen in it and who are the cats?

And DN, Sunkit isn't one of your main cats?? O.o
She isn't? Did you mean a different Sunkit?
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Post  Torchiclove on Tue Dec 27, 2011 3:05 pm

Keep using that gengar laugh and Rivermist is gonna kill you!
Rivermist is my PMD Red Rescue Team eevee <3
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Post  MewMew100 on Tue Dec 27, 2011 3:06 pm

dragonnaruto wrote:lmao. xD

Yay! One of my cats is in a prophecy, even if it is a fake one. xD
I need to become more active in the Frostclan RP.

I thought you were talking about Silver.
And I meant to say that your cat Sunkit was in another prophecy too, but I thought you didn't notice her.
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Post  dragonnaruto on Tue Dec 27, 2011 3:16 pm

I didn't notice Silver lol. I saw Sunkit. I completely forgot about Silver. O.o
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Post  Torchiclove on Mon Jan 09, 2012 7:54 am

I made a new prophecy I wish I could use....
And I felt rhyme-y

Raging water, tinted red....
From which disaster's bred....
Strangled cry from broken bird....
Destroys the jewel's third....
Darkness surrounds cursed kit....
Glowing rain survives with wit....
A secret to be revealed....
Lies deep in cold, must be unsealed....
Damned by streak of gold....
Replaced by rogue, a murder left untold....
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Post  MewMew100 on Mon Jan 09, 2012 5:18 pm

Sweet! Nice job Tor.
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Post  Torchiclove on Mon Jan 09, 2012 7:28 pm

Thanks :3 I thought it was one of my best pieces.
Of course it is obvious what it means, though....
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Post  Torchiclove on Wed Jan 11, 2012 8:15 pm

I'm trying to come up with a prophecy, but I'm out of ideas. I could only come up with two lines.

Mighty tree's spirit felled
by the drowning sun of the drowning sun
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Post  Sheyna on Sat Jan 28, 2012 10:03 am

I'm working on making better prophecies now. Could you guys judge this one? It's from another RP that nobody here is in, except maybe GOW.

The Drifting Mist will be pierced by a Charred Thorn...
The Raging Elements, Dying Flames and Bitter Chill, manipulated by the Thorn...
And the Spirits silenced as the innocent Scorching Shadow blazes along his misguided path...
Without an Icy Path back to the guidance of the kind Leaf and Oak, the two Elements follow close behind...
The dying flames touch the Rose and Nimble Claw, under the Thorn's dark spell...
Only the Pearly White and Bright Lily can cast a cooling blanket over the Charred Thorn and Scorching Shadow, quenching their dark flames...


It's not the best, but I think it's better than some of my older prophecies. What do you all think?
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Post  Rosethorn95 on Sat Jan 28, 2012 9:12 pm

I like the flow of it.

And I might not be on much this week I'm down in Tasmania on holiday and my nan's computer sucks XD
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Post  MewMew100 on Sat Jan 28, 2012 11:06 pm

I like it Tor. Very well written.

@Rose: Chibi says to bring her back a Tasmanian Devil....She's needs someone else to practice poker with. XD
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Post  Rosethorn95 on Sun Jan 29, 2012 12:14 am

To bad I was at the markets Yesterday.

I had to get up at 4:30 to catch the plane.... not pleasant.
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Post  Torchiclove on Fri Mar 30, 2012 9:41 pm

I've been writing prophecies for my other clans(Iceclan, Moonclan, Oceanclan, etc.) and I am completely stumped. I need a new Moonclan prophecy that doesn't reveal too much about the leader, who I can't reveal even here, because KB would see it.
But I am totally dead.
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Post  MewMew100 on Fri Mar 30, 2012 9:45 pm

*puts on smug-looking face* Need help, keh heh??
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Post  Torchiclove on Fri Mar 30, 2012 9:48 pm

I've only come up with two lines...

The final moonfall comes ever close
Of death a final dose
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Post  MewMew100 on Wed Aug 08, 2012 11:44 pm

The death was black,
Happiness broken.
The betrayal was back,
Solitude awoken.
The control of the clan,
Completely in blight.
And yet the sole lie was white...

(Just trying to get back into the groove of tricky writing. This is a mix of a prophecy and a poem for a short story that I may try to make a manga like the Erin Hunter side stories. However, I probably would go through with it...)

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Post  MewMew100 on Sat Sep 01, 2012 3:41 pm

Just a little side prophecy for something that will happen later on. I hope to be writing better ones in the future.

The frost shall be shredded apart,
By earth, sky, and sea.
Destined to halt the clashing elements,
Whom fight and bleed over thee.
Tis the frozen clan who can save the rest 
From the growing storm of blight,
Which threatens the winding forest,
Lengthening the dead of night.

For these clans have lost their way, 
And must be saved by the stars' divine light.
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Post  Torchiclove on Sat Sep 01, 2012 5:04 pm

Quiet nice. Now I must write about 5 to counteract the awesome.
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Post  Green Hornet on Sat Sep 01, 2012 6:48 pm

Frostclan Nursery Rhymes. Mini prophecies in themselves, for me to write for you.

The Ghost

His soul is dark
His heart is black
He roams at night,
So watch your back.
Massive claws of crimson red,
Covered with blood of the dead,
And if at night he finds you,
it may be coated with yours, too.



Rolling Green Hills

I tell you now of hills of green,
Through a drop of blood ne'er was seen,
Neverending streams of prey,
Mice, birds, and rats they say,
Clans lived in peace amongst it all,
Never once was there a brawl,
To this land, it is said,
Is where Starclan sends the righteous dead,
So, kits, let it be known,
Honor your elders and let it be shown
That one day, see this land, you will,
And forever hunt in the rolling green hills.




BLOSSOMCLAN NURSERY STORY TIME! This one is their favorite one, as well as the longest story for their kits to date. Strangely enough, not a word was ever forgotten by any kit in the clan.


The Kittypet and the Medicine Cat

Once, there were three kittypets. Their names have long been forgotten in history, but they were three brothers. The eldest brother was large, strong, and the most determined of the three. The middle brother was thin, fast, and the most intelligent of the three. The youngest brother was heavy, slow, and not very bright, but his brothers didn't love him any less because of it.

One day, the eldest brother ventured forth into the green plains that we now call our home. He didn't return for some time, and the other two kittypets began to worry. The middle brother took off to look for him, and the third, too slow to catch up, was left behind and soon found himself lost.

It was now night time, and he was alone and afraid, before he happened upon a she-cat picking herbs by moonlight. He approached her, and the two began talking.

He asked her what she was doing, and she said that she was gathering herbs for her clan, and asked if he would like to come back with her. He agreed and they set off, finding themselves in a clan's camp.

There, standing in front of the Medicine Cat's den, were his brothers, the eldest badly injured and the other panicking.

Somehow, the youngest managed to keep calm, and the she-cat he had met earlier was confused by this. He approached his brother, finding a bad scratch across his chest.

Without another word, he padded into the Medicine Cat's den and re-emerged with various herbs. His brother was fixed up in no time, and they were prepared to return home.

The eldest and middle brothers were too homesick to stay any longer, but the youngest refused to leave, saying that he clan needed him. His brothers returned home, but he became the clan's Medicine Cat, and was the legendary mentor of Sagestripe, Runner of the Four Rivers.


Not the most elaborate story, and not the most glamorous, but it projected its message into the mind, heart, and soul of every kit of Blossomclan.

All cats are equal, kittypet, warrior, elder alike. No cat is useless, though some may be more skilled than others.
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Post  Torchiclove on Sat Sep 01, 2012 7:35 pm

Nice. I love Rolling Green Hills.
Hm...I wonder what some of our cats would be remembered for. Have to go make scnarios to put cats in fame.
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