Re: The Poetry Place

**Chibi248** Sun Feb 12, 2012 1:38 pm

Don't feel bad for me, dude Razz

**Torchiclove** Sun Feb 12, 2012 1:40 pm

How can I not feel bad for you?

**Chibi248** Sun Feb 12, 2012 1:42 pm

I have.......no idea........i usually don't have any idea X3

**Torchiclove** Sun Feb 12, 2012 1:50 pm

Wow. I'm usually out of ideas too.

**Rosethorn95** Sun Feb 12, 2012 5:31 pm

I've got Anxiety AND Depression. WOOOH depression party!

I'm pretty messed up.

**Torchiclove** Sun Feb 12, 2012 5:36 pm

I've had anxiety attacks before, and it's not fun.....I often start hyperventalating.

**MewMew100** Sun Feb 12, 2012 5:36 pm

..................moo cow.

**Torchiclove** Sun Feb 12, 2012 5:40 pm

WTF?
I am so confused.
I just confused my mother XD
She was like "Your hair looks nice."
*I'm silent*
"Talk back to me!"
"You told me not to talk back."
"Well..Uh....Meh!"

It was fun.

**MewMew100** Sat Mar 17, 2012 11:42 pm

Ok, so this just popped into my head on day and I couldn't do anything to make it go away until I typed it and posted it. And though the character speaking this may seem weird, you guys should know by now that I like to make odd, different characters with distinct personalities, so don't judge:

"Wandering through discorded stars,
My heart filled with empty scars.
Drifting through with her beside me,
Her calming gaze hopes to find thee.
Her soft pale chin upon my head,
My stomach churning, pitted with dread.
Shadows hither, feelings lost;
Our love, our hope, killed by bitter frost.
Oh discorded stars, our only time to meet;
In your blackest night, our love's retreat.
My small white hooves gleam with light,
Our time together, I fear, shall end in blight.
For I cannot be with her, and she with me,
Both are pegasi, kind, and of she.
Though color is gone, and emotions fading;
A sea of torment through which we are wading,
Our time together was short, but sweet,
And through our dreams, we shall next meet.

Oh discorded stars who light our way,
Please stay, beloved night,
So that we aren't separated by the day......"

**Torchiclove** Sun Mar 18, 2012 8:37 am

Beautiful. I saw that on DA
It's really sad though... Sad

**Torchiclove** Sun Mar 25, 2012 8:08 pm

Fallen on a bed of roses
Deep in meaningless poses

Prettied up to die,
to watch so many families cry

And if you winner is crowned as you
You'll always remember what you had to do

A little poem I wrote about The Hunger Games. Saw it yesterday. It was sooooo damn epic. I cried.....
But it's not done yet.

**MewMew100** Sun May 20, 2012 11:24 am

I've finished my latest poem!!! Here it is!! Note: 1 and 2 symbolize two separate voices.

1 & 2; Our Final Mew:

1&2 ~"Two different deaths,
Of murderer the same.
Two different endings,
Leading up to his fame."

1 ~"When he killed me,
Innocence reign true.
Sorrowful tears for the one he slew."

2 ~"When he killed me,
He raged insane.
Bloody lust filled his brain.’"

1~ “My death, it caused
His friend to hate.
With his mother gone,
The murderer’s skull he wished to grate.”

2~ “My death, it caused
His joyous feat.
The evil bird’s claim,
His mission complete.”

1~ “Though black and white
Caused my strain,
His cherry red crush
Ended my pain.”

2~ “Through forest green,
Oblivious to my fate,
His ghost white streak,
Devilish powers await.”

1&2~ “I need not worry,
For I am dead,
But beware the ghost
Cloaked in
Red”

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