Character Control

If anybody EVER even bothered to read the first RP you've seen that Moonpelt's past is compltely planned out (not to mention she's Stoneclaw's sister, so that limits it)
I don't RP Riverpaw much, eh? Every time I RP Riverpaw GH ends up yelling at me.
I need to kill Bearpelt so Moonpelt can leave wich makes other stuffs happen.
*sigh* if only poeple would see my side of it
This time I decided to spend more than 2 minutes on Stoneclaw's form. Here it is:
Character name: Stoneclaw
Gender: tom
Age: 'bout 26 moon
Appearance: You know
Brief personality: Stoneclaw doesn't like to talk much, unlike his sister. He prefers to keep to himelf and stay out of other cats buisness. He doesn't like feeling sorry for anybody, even himself. Stoneclaw believes feeling sorry is a waste of time. Despite his tough exterior he has a huge soft spot for kits. He loves to play with them, if he still has time to hunt. (I believe Jewelkit thought Stoneclaw was her father one time...) Lately he's started argueing with other cats for no reason because he is trying to hide his sadness over Swiftpath being Bane. Stoneclaw channels his depression into fury, one of his flaws. Stoneclaw is a great friend if you take the time to get to know him.
Brief History: muuuurrrrr
Which aspect(s) of this character do you want to develop more: Must I say it again?

To be honest, what you did with Stoneclaw and Moonpelt was the same that happened with me using Darkstar and Petalmist. You began using both of them equally, but you eventually started using Stoneclaw more. I did the same with Darkstar. As I began to notice that Petalmist's character was becoming short and minor, I decided to add more to her own plot. You should try doing the same with either Moonpelt and Bearpelt Just bits and pieces to their parts or just start Rping them more in camp until they start doing stuff like hunting or talking with the others.

I'll try that....I don't know if Stoneclaw should start talking with other cats nicely or shut up and pretty much live in a tree.

I'd say, start small by using Moonpelt or Bearpelt more. When one of them becomes better known among the clan as themselves, then use them to help others better understand Stoneclaw and his feelings.

Moonpelt was always the likeable one......
I don't know about Bearpelt. He has a dead brother but I never went into that much. Nobody knows what happened to his parets either....OPPURTUNITIES!!!! *bloodlust*

There you go! Start working with Bearpelt. You could add a bit of a crazy twist like I did with Equestria being Icefern's mother. Or how GH made Swiftpath and Flamestar are siblings

I'm 'bout to pm you something.

Hm.. For Lavenderpaw, I think you could try thinking of reasons why her personality is like that, despite how her father acted towards them. You could also work a little more on the personality itself; perhaps add some things that make her drop her usual friendly attitude.

HOLY CRAP!! Don't ask me why, but I jumped to a section of the first RP and I noticed that Petalmist had a crush on Phoenixtalon....(She tried flirting with him even with Stoneclaw as her mate XD XD XD)

What page? I want to see this.

Crap, I forgot what page. I'll have to find it again XD

Lol, wow. I don't remember that at all... Amazing what you find when going back through the RP.

IKR? I found that Moonpelt's original name was Moonfang.

Did you know Spiritsong was originally supopsed to become a warrior?

Moonpelt was originally supossed to be a med. cat XD
Tigerclaw's name was originally Tigershadow, too.
Moonpelt and Stoneclaw's original forms:
Username: Torchiclove
Cat Name:stoneclaw
Rank:warrior
Rank Wanted: ???
Appearance: smallish tom tuxedo coat with big green eyes
Personality: cold hard to get to great at catching small things and once you gain his friendship great to be around
Age: 24 moons
Gender: tom
Crush: none
Mate: none
Kits: none


Username: Torchicove
Cat Name: Moonpaw(fang)
Rank: apprentice
Rank Wanted: medicine cat
Appearance: normal sized mostly white cat with black paws
Personality: loving caring always wanting to be around other the exact oppisite of her brother stoneclaw
Age: 9 moons
Gender: she-cat
Crush:moonpath
Mate:none
Kits:none

Wow. I don't even have their old forms, because I kept them updated throughout the RP. Well, mostly... I couldn't keep track of ages. XD

I can guess these were old since you didn't use commas or capitals

yeah, took forever to find them XD they were around pg. 50.
I'm looking for Vulturewing and Tigerclaw's forms.

Mine are on the very first page, second post... I was first to join (Besides GH, of course). XD I feel special.

Username:Torchiclove
Cat Name:vulture(wing)
Rank: loner
Rank Wanted: ???
Appearance:

Personality:too much of a loner for his own good has a really good sense of humor (I might kill him off his scars are from a rouge)
Age: adult
Gender: tom
Crush: none
Mate: none
Kits: none

MY little Vulture XD the picture is hugerer than I thought

... Hugerer?

Been meaning to do this for a while now.

New character of the moment:
Petalmist (aka Petalz)

lol. If Petalz was human, I can imagine her as a biker chick. xD

Anyways, Petalmist i an interesting character. She really comes to life. her emotions are masterfully portrayed by Mewmew. Greedy, ambitious, sad, revengeful, she's the complete package xD. I'm looking forward to seeing how she'll interact with Sparrowkit. It's be fuuun.

Sparrowkit hates her. A lot.

Rosethorn hates Sparrowkit.

I understand that. Sparrowkit likes Rosethorn like an aunt(She kinda is actually....) But he hates Petalmist now.